Schools are obsolete because of home-schooling. Agree/disagree?
Bài mẫu đề thi IELTS Writing Sample task 2 ngày 29/04/2020 chủ đề giáo dục (education): Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because of home-schooling. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Trong bài viết này, DOL Tự Học sẽ cung cấp cho mọi người ý tưởng, dàn bài, bài mẫu band 8.0, từ vựng hay đi kèm và nhận xét điểm theo 4 tiêu chí.
🚀 Đề bài
😵 Dàn ý
- One would have to stay at home → put more financial pressure on the working parent
- Their pedagogical methods are not verified → ineffective
- Cannot make friends
- Cannot know where they stand in the pool of kids in the same age and area → parents cannot fully assess whether their children are smart or not
📝 Bài mẫu
Due to the rapid development of technology today, many people think that children no longer need to go to school to study. Instead, they can learn from the Internet and
It is common knowledge that children are not the most
Another reason why I think kids should not learn from the Internet or be home-schooled is the detrimental effects on their communication skills. For most children, school is not only a source of education but also a place where they can meet other kids, teachers, and other staff members. Some of the most beautiful and long-lasting friendships and romantic relationships stem from middle or high school, for example. Moreover, by meeting other children, parents can acknowledge some standards to which they should compare their children; hence, knowing if their children’s development is
In conclusion, although the benefits technology brings to education are undeniable, I strongly disagree that children do not need to go to school because of this. Schools are an effective use of educational workers and provide children with chances to communicate with other children as well as teachers and staff members.
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📚 Vocabulary
Cập nhật thêm một số từ vựng chủ đề Education thông qua bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 vừa rồi.
✨ Bài tập Exercise
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Exercise 1
Điền vào chỗ trống với các từ vựng trong danh sách từ phía trên
Having
People aged 40-55 are considered the
She stands out from other teachers for having a unique
Exercise 2
Despite being
He performed worse in tests because he's been
Even though she's extremely busy, she managed to
Drinking too much water can actually
Schools are
Many mental issues seen in adults
The judges had a hard time deciding the winner because both contestants are
Trình Writing tăng nhanh nhờ có đề để ôn luyện, cùng tham khảo những đề hay nhất tháng 04/2020 nhé.
💡 Lời kết
Tới đây là hết rồi Sau sample "Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home.To what extent do you agree or disagree?", DOL mong các bạn không chỉ nắm được cách trả lời hiệu quả cho một bài Writing task 2 dạng Agree & Disagree mà còn có thể bó túi được một vài từ vựng, cấu trúc hay của chủ đề Education.
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