Bài mẫu band 8.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 29/12/2022

Chủ đề tội phạm (crime) là một chủ đề phổ biến trong bài thi IELTS Writing Task 2. Trong bài viết này, DOL sẽ cung cấp cho mọi người ý tưởng, dàn bài, bài mẫu band 8.0, từ vựng hay đi kèm và nhận xét điểm theo 4 tiêu chí cho đề thi ngày 29/12/2022.

🚀 Đề bài

😵 Dàn ý

DOL sẽ trình bày quan điểm qua 1 đoạn mở bài (introduction), 2 đoạn thân bài (body paragraph), và 1 đoạn kết bài (conclusion).

Mở bài: Sau khi paraphrase lại đề bài, DOL sẽ đưa ra một Thesis Statement (luận điểm).

Thân bài:

Body 1: DOL sẽ giải thích vì sao tăng tuổi lái xe tối thiểu có thể giảm tai nạn giao thông.
Body 2: DOL sẽ đề xuất một giải pháp hiệu quả hơn - tăng mức độ của các hình thức xử phạt người vi phạm luật giao thông.

Kết bài: Cuối cùng, DOL sẽ tổng kết lại những ý chính đã nêu trên và nhấn mạnh lại quan điểm của mình.

Insert Statement here...
To some extent, while I agree that this strategy may reduce the number of traffic accidents, I believe harsher punishments are significantly more effective and are currently in place in several nations.  

Insert Paragraph Title Here...
Body paragraph 1:
Topic Sentence
Admittedly, a higher legal driving age will help considerably minimize road accidents.
Idea 1
Young people cannot realize the risks.
viết, hoặc bấm enter để thêm bullet point
many vehicle accidents --> caused by reckless driving by young people -->  underage drivers cannot appreciate the severity of the risks of dangerous behaviours

Insert Paragraph Title Here...
Body paragraph 2:
Topic Sentence
Increasing the severity of the penalties for those who are found guilty of driving offenses is a more efficient strategy to protect the safety of roadway traffic.  
Idea 1
Penalties dissuade would-be offenders and reduce offender recidivism.
viết, hoặc bấm enter để thêm bullet point
example: a drunk driver in Canada = up to five years in jail and a ten-year driving suspension.

📝 Bài mẫu

Some argue that raising the minimum age at which individuals may legally operate a car or motorcycle is the most effective strategy to improve road safety. To some extent, while I agree that this strategy may reduce the number of traffic accidents, I believe harsher punishments are significantly more effective and are currently in place in several nations.

Admittedly, a higher legal driving age will help considerably minimize road accidents. The reality is that many vehicle accidents may be traced back to reckless driving by young people. Many of these drivers are

and, as a result, do not yet have the to fully appreciate the severity of the risks they pose when they like speeding or drinking while driving. Increasing the minimum age to drive may ensure that even the youngest drivers are mature enough to drive safely, protecting themselves and others on the road.

On the other hand, I believe this strategy has limited success since many young people today still

. Therefore, increasing for those who are found guilty of driving offenses is a more efficient strategy to protect the safety of roadway traffic. For instance, a person convicted of driving while in Canada faces a possible of up to five years and a ten-year driving suspension. These penalties have the ability to and reduce offender .

In conclusion, increasing the legal age to drive may improve road safety; however, I think stricter penalties would have a far greater impact on reducing road accidents.

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